Ten retellings where the stakes are as agonizing as Austen’s

Austen Retellings That Actually Hold Together

Here's my test for an Austen retelling, and it's a strict one. Austen’s plots turn on what’s at stake. Money, class, reputation, an entailed estate, and a world where a woman's best option is usually a good marriage. Take those pressures away and Pride and Prejudice is just two people being rude at a party. Which can be fun! But it isn't Austen.

So a retelling holds together when it finds a real equivalent for those pressures in its new setting: something that would genuinely push these people towards the choices Austen’s characters make. A retelling that borrows the names and the meet-cute and nothing else falls apart the moment you ask why anyone’s behaving this way.

Would a modern woman with a job and a phone really put up with all this? Sometimes no. These ten find good reasons why she might.

Four novels, ten retellings, and one question I asked of every one: does it hold together? These do.

Jane Austen retellings

Pride and Prejudice

The most retold novel in the language, so the bar is high and the field is crowded. Six that clear it, one of them with witches.

Longbourn book cover
Ebook Publication Date:October 8, 2013
Ebook Publisher:Vintage

Longbourn

By Jo Baker

354 pages

While Elizabeth and her sisters fuss over balls and husbands, Sarah, the Bennets' orphaned housemaid, is starting to chafe against the limits of her class. Then a new footman arrives under mysterious circumstances.

This holds together beautifully, because it doesn't need an equivalent: it simply turns round and looks at the people Austen's world depended on. All that laundry had to be washed by somebody. The class pressure runs through every page, and it's stronger here than in the original.

Best for
readers who want Pride and Prejudice from below stairs
Holds together
strongly
Unmarriageable book cover
Ebook Publication Date:January 22, 2019
Ebook Publisher:Ballantine Books

Unmarriageable

By Soniah Kamal

386 pages

Alys Binat has sworn never to marry. A scandal has wrecked her family's fortune and marriage prospects, and she's found happiness teaching English literature to schoolgirls in Pakistan, many of whom will leave to marry before they graduate. Then she meets Mr. Darsee at a wedding.

Austen in a society where a daughter's marriage prospects are still a family's financial future. The pressures don't need translating because they never went away, and that's what makes it work.

Best for
readers who want the closest match to Austen's stakes in a modern setting
Holds together
strongly
Ayesha at Last book cover
Ebook Publication Date:June 4, 2019
Ebook Publisher:Berkley

Ayesha at Last

By Uzma Jalaluddin

366 pages

Ayesha has set aside her dreams of poetry for a teaching job, to pay off her debts to a wealthy uncle. She lives with her lively Muslim family in Canada, doesn't want an arranged marriage, and is irritatingly attracted to Khalid, who is as smart and handsome as he is conservative and judgmental.

Now this is how it's done. It's a loose retelling, with family, faith and community doing the work that class and money do in Austen, and it's funny and heartbreaking by turns. It has flaws, and they stand out precisely because so much of it is so good.

Best for
readers who want a warm, funny contemporary with real cultural texture
Holds together
strongly
Eligible: A modern retelling of Pride and Prejudice book cover
Ebook Publication Date:April 19, 2016
Ebook Publisher:Random House

Eligible: A modern retelling of Pride and Prejudice

By Curtis Sittenfeld

Book 4 of 4: Austen Project · 503 pages

Liz is a magazine writer in her late thirties living in New York. When their father has a health scare, she and her sister Jane go home to Cincinnati and find their Tudor house crumbling and their family in chaos: Kitty and Lydia are too busy with CrossFit and Paleo diets to get jobs, and Mary is on her third online master's degree.

Here the pressure is money and a family in decline, which is exactly right. And Sittenfeld is sharp enough to make the Bennets' modern failings as funny as Austen's.

Best for
readers who want a satirical, grown-up modern retelling
Holds together
mostly
Most Ardently: A Pride & Prejudice Remix book cover
Ebook Publication Date:January 16, 2024
Ebook Publisher:Feiwel & Friends

Most Ardently: A Pride & Prejudice Remix

By Gabe Cole Novoa

Part of: Remixed Classics (10 books) · 298 pages

London, 1812. Oliver Bennet feels trapped, not only by the corsets and petticoats he's forced to wear, but by the expectations of a world that thinks he's a girl named Elizabeth, who's meant to attend balls, entertain suitors and become someone's wife.

This one keeps Austen's period and sharpens its central pressure: if marriage is a trap for Elizabeth, it's a different and deeper trap for Oliver. The social logic doesn't just survive, it gets heavier.

Best for
YA readers who want a queer, trans reimagining
Holds together
strongly
The Scandalous Confessions of Lydia Bennet, Witch book cover
Ebook Publication Date:October 3, 2023
Ebook Publisher:Grand Central Publishing

The Scandalous Confessions of Lydia Bennet, Witch

By Melinda Taub

401 pages

Lydia tells the real story. Kitty is actually a barn cat (and Lydia's familiar), Wickham is exactly as wicked as everyone believes, because he's a demon, and Mr. Darcy's feelings about magic make his feelings about etiquette look relaxed.

Does it hold together? By its own rules, yes, which is all a good fantasy retelling needs: magic has costs, and Lydia's choices have reasons. It's simply delightful. I've always wanted Lydia to get the spotlight, and this is very nearly the book I'd have asked for.

Best for
readers who want Austen with a wink and a wand
Holds together
mostly, by design

Persuasion

Eight years of regret and one second chance. Both of these move it into the future, which works far better than it has any right to.

For Darkness Shows the Stars book cover
Ebook Publication Date:June 12, 2012
Ebook Publisher:HarperCollins

For Darkness Shows the Stars

By Diana Peterfreund

Book 1 of 2: For Darkness Shows the Stars · 448 pages

Generations after a genetic experiment went wrong and decimated humanity, a nobility that outlawed most technology rules what's left. Four years ago, Elliot North refused to run away with Kai, her childhood sweetheart and a servant, and chose her family's estate instead. Now the estate is failing, and she has to rent land to a fleet of shipbuilders that includes a famous explorer called Captain Malakai Wentforth: an almost unrecognisable Kai.

This is the best example on the list of what I mean. It builds a whole new class system so that Persuasion's central choice, duty over love, makes sense all over again. It's science fiction that does the social work.

Best for
YA readers who want Persuasion with real stakes
Holds together
strongly
Series
book one
The Stars We Steal book cover
Ebook Publication Date:February 4, 2020
Ebook Publisher:HarperTeen

The Stars We Steal

By Alexa Donne

406 pages

Engagement season has arrived, and eighteen-year-old Princess Leonie, heir to a faded European spaceship, needs to marry money: her father and sister are about to spend the last of the family fortune, and without money she can't patent her latest invention. Then her childhood friend and first love comes back.

A princess forced to marry for money is Austen's pressure moved into space, and the money problem is spelled out on the first page.

Best for
YA readers who'd enjoy Persuasion crossed with a dating show
Holds together
mostly

Emma

A rich young woman with time on her hands and opinions about everyone’s love life. Put her on the Upper East Side and nobody notices the difference.

Emma of 83rd Street book cover
Ebook Publication Date:May 23, 2023
Ebook Publisher:Gallery Books

Emma of 83rd Street

By Audrey Bellezza, Emily Harding

Book 1 of 3: For the Love of Austen · 383 pages

Emma Woodhouse is beautiful, clever and rich, and has spent her twenty-three years on the Upper East Side with very little to trouble her, until her matchmaking gets her sister married off and moved away. Bored in her final year of grad school, she takes on a new project: Nadine, a wide-eyed Ohio transplant.

Emma travels better than most of Austen, because a rich young woman with too much time and a matchmaking habit needs no translating at all. The setting is closer to Clueless than to Highbury, and it doesn't pretend otherwise.

Best for
readers who want a light, fun modern Emma
Holds together
mostly
Series
book one of For the Love of Austen

Sense and Sensibility

Two sisters, one sensible and one very much not. The title of this one tells you which way it leans.

Sex, Lies and Sensibility book cover
Ebook Publication Date:February 13, 2024
Ebook Publisher:Berkley

Sex, Lies and Sensibility

By Nikki Payne

428 pages

At the reading of her father's will, Nora finds out she's his secret child. With her sensible reputation already wrecked by a viral video, all she and her free-spirited sister have left is a rundown inn in the middle of nowhere, which they have to fix up before Labor Day or lose.

Two sisters with no money and one asset they can't afford to lose: that's Sense and Sensibility's pressure, intact. And it's a lot steamier than Austen.

Best for
readers who want a spicy modern romance with an Austen spine
Holds together
mostly

Which should you read?

If you want the retelling that understands Austen best, read Longbourn. If you want the pressures alive and well in a modern society, Unmarriageable and Ayesha at Last. If you want Persuasion reborn in a world that earns it, For Darkness Shows the Stars. And if you just want Lydia Bennet, witch, at last getting her due: same, honestly. Same.

Jane Austen retellings

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